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A 73 year old man named Bob was playing ball in the park with his friends. His friends
are George and Frank. George is funny and he is 168 pounds and he is kind. Oh and one
more thing he is cool. Frank is smart and he is 98 pounds. Frank kicked the ball in the
Abandoned castle. It was scary to look at it. They walked slowly, they opened the door and it
Creaked as it opened. They went in the castle. They are looking for the ball we looked every
where but they could not find the ball. There was cob webs all around us then we went in
the kitchen where We looked in the stove. There was a tunnel. They went in and they saw
the BALL!! But the ball was flat then they heard snoring they looked around the corner…… then
there was a monster. He woke up and he was MAD!!! THE MONSTER WAS TRYING
TO KILL THEM !!! SO THEY WERE RUNNING AROUND AND JUST GOT OUT IN TIME.
STRAGHT TO our homes and never ever went back to that house again!
The end
By Jakob Nelson
A 73 year old man named Bob was playing ball in the park with his friends. His friends
are George and Frank. George is funny and he is 168 pounds and he is kind. Oh and one
more thing he is cool. Frank is smart and he is 98 pounds. Frank kicked the ball in the
Abandoned castle. It was scary to look at it. They walked slowly, they opened the door and it
Creaked as it opened. They went in the castle. They are looking for the ball we looked every
where but they could not find the ball. There was cob webs all around us then we went in
the kitchen where We looked in the stove. There was a tunnel. They went in and they saw
the BALL!! But the ball was flat then they heard snoring they looked around the corner…… then
there was a monster. He woke up and he was MAD!!! THE MONSTER WAS TRYING
TO KILL THEM !!! SO THEY WERE RUNNING AROUND AND JUST GOT OUT IN TIME.
STRAGHT TO our homes and never ever went back to that house again!
The end
By Jakob Nelson
3 comments:
Jakob creat job on creating a blog. you did create by adding your story, your pictur and who wrote the story. Don't forget to write who the editors of your story were and try to put the title at the very top on the page! :)
Jakob your story is very creative. I liked how you put their weight. That was good. Mabey fix some of the spelling and paragraphs. Great Job!
I really liked youre story Jakob but I do not get how 3 75 year old people could kick a ball
Andrew.W
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